peer comments

Julia:
 what do you mean level?  the level means the personal trait?

Pearl: 

• In your second paragraph, you refer the personal trait
• but i do not know what you actually want to say.
  
  
  So does it means that parents should follow their personal traits to decide whether their children should inherit the firm or not?
  
  
  I think it is boring to talk about the personal traits by classing characters

   and I really want to say it can not prove anything.
  
  
  • I think your reason and your result are not clear.
  • when I read it I will think "so?"
  • when you revise you may build your structure again.
    LISA
    so what is your point about this source?
    
    
    so you  just want to show the factors of your issue in this annotation?
    
    
    i wonder what you think about your issue after knowing the factors.
    
    
    can you tell us your view about your issue? u think that the children succeed their parent's business is good or not good?